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"Ugh, Cuitiliú, get out of my face, you're creeping me out." the does eye twitched as she stared at the amber colored fawnling. Cuitiliú twitched her almond shaped ears at her herd member, her expressionless eyes focused in a level stare at the other.

"I see. . ." she stepped back away from the doe, who sighed with relief, and tilted her head. Her blank stare still fixed on the dark red fawnling. "Well? What should I do?" she asked, her tail curling up behind her to twitch in a feline-esque expression. On anyone else it would have been viewed as a gesture of impatience but with Cuitiliú it was automatically assumed to be just an odd tick; one of many. The red doe glared at her.

"How should I know? I'm not your keeper." she snapped. Cuiti tilted her head the other direction in response, her ears flopping comically to the side.

"I see. . . ."

with a yell the Doe stamped her hooves and shoved her head at Cuiti, "Stop saying that. You're giving me the creeps, seriously, Cuitiliú, cut it out! I'm getting goosebumps over here" invitation to invade personal bubble received; Cuiti stepped up to Sahlii and shoved her face close to the red does body to look for the fabled goosebumps.

". . . . . I see no geese, nor bumps, on your flesh, Sahlii. . . . . was this a joke? If so then I do not get it."

"No. . . . no it was not a j- would you get back! Cuiti I swear, you have no idea about boundaries and personal space how is a woman supposed to breath around you!?"

Stepping back once more, obedient to Sahlii's demands, Cuiti sat down on her haunches "I really think the Captain should know that there are two Oakferns running amok this far inland."

"And how do we know they were Oakferns, hmmmm, Cuiti? They could have been Windborne spies instead; from the main herd. . . . to. . . . crap." Sahlii swore. Either way someone was going to need to leave their post and inform the Captain and since pitching her voice meant that Cuiti would be heard by everyone, including the invaders, that wasn't an option. Sahlii groaned. "You're absolutely sure you didn't just imagine these invaders in one of your special moments?" Sahlii demanded, shoving her face into Cuiti's.

". . . . then it is okay to be in your bubble, Sahlii?" Cuiti's ears perked up, curiosity bringing a faint light to her otherwise dull eyes. Sahlii swore and shouted 'no' at her before stomping back a few yards to pace, and mutter, and pace some more. Cuitiliú stood and looked from side to side at the surrounding area. The soft crunch of the sand-like dirt under Sahliis splayed hooves the only sound in the otherwise quiet clearing. "uhm. . . .which way was the herd again?" Cuiti turned her blank face back to Sahlii.

With a moan of exasperation and defeat Sahlii sighed and turned away from Cuiti, "You're absolutely useless, Cuiti. I'll go tell them. Where did you see the Oakferns."

"They were following Bunyip Creek on the Eastern bank."

"Oh yes, this, she knows." Sahlii rolled her eyes. "You have the worse sense of direction, Cuiti, honestly. You're survival this long is amazing. You're absolutely certain they were on the East- I mean far bank?" at least identifying the river was a point in Cuiti's favor. The doe nodded in response, almost vigorously.

"They were opposite to me and I have not crossed the river today, Sahlii."

"Fine. . . . do not shove wind up my ass, Cuiti." with a mighty leap Sahlii vanished into the forest of eucalyptus. The soft humming and whisper of feathers and birds was all that was left as the rustling of the leaves settled in the does passing. Cuiti stared after her for a moment before looking up at the sky.

"I wonder why you're blue, today, and not purple. . . . purple's a pretty color, you should go back to being purple. . ." she spoke to herself in a soft voice as she observed the sky. "What do you think, sky, should I wait here for Sahlii to return?" the sky offered no answer to the inquisitive doe. With a twitch of her ear and another flick of her curling tail she glanced around the forest. "No, I suppose not. Lets go south, I'm sure we'll find something to report there." the sky, the forest, and the sand were her friends. They, at least, didn't wig-out on her when she invaded their personal space.

Spiders didn't like it, and snakes didn't either. Come to think of it Kangaroos didn't really fancy having a curious yellow-brown doe shove her nose in their faces either. They kicked, and punched, and were really not nice. She wiggled her nose at the memory of her last Kangaroo encounter. "No, I don't want to see them again. That really hurt. And was entirely unnecessary." she informed herself with a defining nod. "Brill?" she paused, tilting her head left and right in a slow, pendulous motion mimicking a ticking clock. After a long moment she dropped to her knees, placed her head sideways on the ground and stared at the underbrush as though it would provide the answers she sought.

 "Where could he have gone. . ." she pushed back to her feet, having no luck finding the billed creature she sought she marched on.



:iconbroken-arrowec:

Windborne Fawn

Position: Cape Splinter Member
Name: Cuitiliú
Gender: doe // female
Age: 7 years
Height: 8.3 hands
Body Type: light build

Quick Personality:
    sort of a loner-type Doe, Cuiti has a knack for unnerving those around her, though she doesn't mean to do so. She tends to bring up deep topics and invoke disturbing thoughts about life, the world, and, well, everything. A thoughtful Doe though she lacks the common sense to keep her thoughts to herself, Cuiti can and will dive head-first into conflict without realizing she's done so. This poses a bit of a problem because in combat Cuiti is rather useless. It's not that she doesn't want to fight but that she simply can't. She's weak, brittle, frail, and though she'll do everything in her power to get back to her feet every time she's knocked down (another disturbing thing about her, really) she's not going to be able to do much else. She lacks most emotions, in general, because she never learned to feel them. Anger isn't something she knows personally so she observes it from a distance (or from inside your personal space like a creepy stalker staring eye-to-eye with death) but doesn't comprehend it. Pain, she understands, curiosity, she's got down pact; but anger, happiness, greed, envy, etc. she just doesn't feel them. Because of this her expression tend to be bland, and constantly lifeless giving her a living-doll affect. Her eyes rarely glitter, or glow with emotion and barely reflect light, as they are. Due to her knack for disturbing others, including those that know her best, Cuiti tends to spend most of her time on the outskirts of her group playing foot soldier and spy and look out, and whatever else anyone can assign her to keep her at bay.

History:
    winter - 749

      - - born at Gumtree Hollow ( last fawn of the season )
      - - survives blizzard

    spring - 750

      - - travels to cockle bay
      - - meets dolphins
      - - almost drowned by the tide
      - - learns to respect the ocean

    summer - 750

      - - observes the other foals, not too playful
      - - breaks her leg in a hole
      - - meets herbalist
      - - informed of her brittle illness

    autumn - 750

      - - abandoned by her father ( because of her illness )
      - - fails to make friends
      - - leg heals slowly

    winter - 750

      - - travels with the main herd for winter grounds

    spring - 751

      - - leg finishes healing
      - - leaves her mother for norther-bound adventures
      - - meets Brill

    summer/autumn/winter 751

      - -joins the Cape splinter herd
      - - remains on the fringe
      - - invades wildlife personal space

    years 752-754

      - - begins learning to concentrate
      - - finally shows signs of magic
      - - is trained to control her magic as best she can

    year 755

      - - begins seriously working on her magic
      - - trains her body for light, swift travel
      - - learns offensive magic
      - - meets kangaroos ( ouch! )
      - - still invades personal space of wildlife


Color: sooty flaxen chestnut
Genetics: ee/Aa/StySty/ff/nrz
Appearance:
    Her mane is long and thin with seashells, twigs, and pebble-glass braided into it. her tail is shorter than most with long, thin hair on the end and along the under-side also decorated with seashells, tiny pebble-glass, braids and twigs. Very thin in build with muscles grown towards running rather than fighting she has a brittleness about her bones that makes it easy for her bones to break and difficult for her to fight. A few, small, scars adorn her legs from constant scrapes and minor scuffles. Because of her illness she appears slighter of build than she actually is. Her eyes and ears are both far too big for her face leaving her with a perpetual fawn appearance.

Other:
    platypus sometimes-companion named Brill. He comes and he goes so she doesn't always have him around. Brill is the one that brings her things along with the few birds that can tolerate her nosiness


Stats:
    WIND
    basic manipulation; small breezes and gusts of wind around her body, short bursts of wind to project her voice/volume. directing existing wind currents offensively, offensive conjuring of winds ( this exhausts her quickly ); creating head winds for pursuers and tail winds for allies in flight, however useful this turns out for the allies is unknown but it's a pain in the neck for pursuers!
  • level: medium [ 11 ]
      no training

    HERB LORE
    healing scrapes, bruises, open wounds
  • level: basic [ 0 ]
      no training
  • FIGHT
    her abilities
  • Speed: [ build + 1 ] 5
    Stamina: 4
    Strength: [ limit- 4 ] 1
    Experience: 1
      no training


  • Other Works
    title // rp/imge/story - - - ; [ link ]


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;-; I couldn't help myself I really couldn't get this character idea out of my head and the prospect of an un-marked or minimally marked fawnling was too awesome a chance //stabs eyes with anpu/min spots anyway if I don't win her I'll find another design to use for Cuiti because she will eventually live!

btw 'Sahlii' is pronounced 'sah-lee-e'
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=femalefred Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a strange little fawnling! She seems both awesome and disturbing. The conversation with the sky at the end of this was a great touch :)
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:iconbroken-arrowec:
thank you :3 I figured fawnlings needed a non-violent odd-one in the bunch xD
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=femalefred Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, very true!
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~Munchkin64 Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Naw, Cui, I don't find you creepy :hug:
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:iconbroken-arrowec:
rofl Cui doesnt know how to respond to that xD
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~Munchkin64 Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bahah, you gotta teach her Broken!!
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~Munchkin64 Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD:
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